Taking Potty's advice, I jsut wrote the first few pages, and have Jalie in a position where she can like Mr Scattle, while also explaining something...
I sent mine out according to the guidelines supplied by the agent's website - still rejected. It is a crap shoot, IMHO. You keep trying until someone...
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