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  1. Lamperoux
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    i'm in PA, your in Wisconsin, i can't save ya hon.
  2. Lamperoux
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    well, if you know anything about the french revolution, Prince Louis Charles was the unofficial king who died when he was ten in a prison cell. He was also abused, and forced to accuse his mother of sexual abuse under the coaching of Jacques Hebert.
  3. Lamperoux
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    Well anyways, i've revamped my entire story.

    The character now comes from the French Revolution.
  4. Lamperoux
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    ur going crazy, i can agree with that
  5. lovetowrite
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    I think the whole teen/vampire romance is over used. Which is why I went a different direction. lol

    Twilight, True Blood, Vampire Diaries, Vampire Academy, etc...

    There are a flood of them out there. Girl moves into a new town/falls in love with a vampire/vampire changes girl, etc..

    That could hurt it in the long run.. because it's already been done. They want something new, untouched and different.

    Even the vampire slayer novels are over used, because of Buffy, Night Huntress, etc..

    I understand your frustrations, though. It's hard to come up with an acceptable story line that you know has never been done.
  6. lovetowrite
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    Well you never know.

    It may get published. All you can do is send it out to as many agents as you can and hope.

    I've been researching, researching, researching... and I've just now gotten to the point where I can begin my outlining.

    It's all about originality and a catchy story line. If you've got something that you think is original, all you can do is try.
  7. Lamperoux
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    lol
  8. Lamperoux
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    ummm...well...welcome...again...i guess
  9. lovetowrite
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    Have you submissed the first book yet?

    That's what scares me is sending it in and getting it denied.
  10. Lamperoux
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    you know, the buttons oyu clikc on on a computer. Like the exit button, the button you clicked to get to htis profile...
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I'm the biggest procrastinator you'll ever meet and i love to write! Interesting combo, i know...;)
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by mocha on 07-28-2011 at 02:18 PM
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Then and Now
I used to think that being different was bad,
But now I know the only way to be ourselves is to be unique.

I used to think that if I made a new friend, I’d lose one,
But now I know that if I make a new friend I’ll always have room for another.

I used to think that nothing could hurt me,
But now I know that when I DO get hurt I bleed.

I used to think you could get anything by wishing,
But now I know you must work

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by mocha on 05-22-2011 at 03:35 AM
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ohmigawd. i just totally realized how long i've been away from WF!!! i'm so sorry! blame DA! no wait! dont both DA and WF are awesome! don't worry! i have more writing on the way! for sure this time. this time they're going to be short stories!
i've got more writing on DA. I'm an addict, i'm sorry! (http://black-in-black.deviantart.com/)
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My Poetry: What do you think?

by mocha on 12-24-2010 at 03:55 PM
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Here's some poems i wrote awhile ago. I like them but i was hoping for some feedback.



War
Shadow-rimmed ditches,
drenched in darkness.

Blood rivers shine,
under a copper moon.

Stinking corpses cover the ground,
rotting into the stony battlefield.

Roses and brambles claw at flesh,
revealing alabaster bones.

Ravens tear at the wounds of the living,
dying

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I'm.... ALIVE!!!!!!

by mocha on 10-09-2010 at 04:29 PM
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Okay, sorry i haven't been active but school has been absolutely horrible!!!!!!!!! so much to do...

and my writers block is not helping. i wanna write, i really do. but i can't. a major pet-peeve of mine is when people don't comment on what i write, even though they want to and i NEED them to. i am dependent on input. i would not have lasted the last two years on my stories without it and now all my friends have stopped. grr... so i am faced with a delema here:

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My dream

by mocha on 08-28-2010 at 05:08 PM
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Okay, so awhile ago i had this crazy dream that was a mix of the Transformers 2 movie and an Indiana Jones movie. yeah, i am weird.

'So Leo, Sam, and Mikaela are flung out into the middle of the desert by the good Decepticon (airforce plane) but he dissapears when they crash. Sam and Mikaela are on the top of a very high cliff and leo is at the bottom of the the cliff and he can't get up for some reason.

Then Sam turns into Indiana Jones and pulls a long coil of rope

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