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    Today, 10:55 AM
    Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! I'm glad that the piece feels like it can stand alone and that you are interested in more. I...
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    Yesterday, 05:57 PM
    Chapter 3 "Ah, Shell, just in time." he says as I walk through the front door. "Arlene, my dar-ling" he sings high to get her attention from the...
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    Yesterday, 05:55 PM
    I'm working on a story. I have never written anything long before and I'm hoping to post sections of it on the forums when I feel ready. If you...
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    06-16-2013, 10:48 PM
    Hello Kevin, Thanks for the excellent comments and advice! You got it all correct. It is a school day, in high school between 2 girls. I tried...
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    06-16-2013, 10:28 PM
    Ahh, I see now. I didn't realize that it was part of a bigger picture. I'd love to see the rest of it sometime. I definitely felt as if the speakers...
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    06-14-2013, 06:28 PM
    Chapter 1 "I'm sorry I missed your birthday party, Shelia." Molly apologized as a greeting. She grabbed a hold of my backpack to slow me down. She...
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    06-14-2013, 06:10 PM
    I like the ambiguity of the ending where she said she took his most valuable treasure. At first I thought, "Oh she shot him" but then I thought,...
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    06-14-2013, 05:53 PM
    I think this is an interesting piece especially since it is done solely through dialogue. I don't know who is talking, such as their gender though I...
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    06-13-2013, 02:44 AM
    Meego replied to a thread Middle Ground in Poetry
    Yeah, of course. That is fine as well, obviously. I hope it does help in some way for the future, good luck. :D
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    06-13-2013, 02:32 AM
    It reminds me of a mix of stories, one of which is Avatar. But it doesn't really matter if it resembles other stories, its how you hope to make it...
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    06-13-2013, 12:59 AM
    Hahahaha. I understand. Especially these kinds of threads. :D And thank you, I'm glad that you feel that my piece worked with the song. I tried to...
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    06-13-2013, 12:41 AM
    Meego replied to a thread Middle Ground in Poetry
    Sorry my reply is so late. I suppose that the emotion I could think of, looking back over your piece could be loneliness for one example of an...
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    06-13-2013, 12:24 AM
    Ah, are you referring to my piece or my comment about your piece? And yeah, I think this is a clever thread. I like the idea of it. :D
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    06-13-2013, 12:16 AM
    I think you song and story is interesting. I think your piece could have been good if you weren't limited to such a small word count. I was really...
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    06-13-2013, 12:03 AM
    This seemed interesting. I chose a song that I came across and loved in a Korean Drama called Heartstrings. Though the show itself is very mild and...
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    06-12-2013, 11:04 PM
    Meego replied to a thread To shave today in Fiction
    It is okay to post your writings on here (I'm sure that is how others feel too) and you don't have to go in one specific direction. Many people write...
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    06-12-2013, 10:28 PM
    Meego replied to a thread To shave today in Fiction
    I have seen a few of your posts in some of the forums and read through them. You definitely have a passion and change your tone for the pieces but...
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    06-12-2013, 10:01 PM
    Meego replied to a thread Small snip of my book in Fiction
    I'm having a hard time formulating an opinion about this snippet. I'm not sure if you are looking for critique or not but I thought I might point...
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Recently graduated with a BA in Philosophy. I'm married to a great guy. I fill my time with work, family, friends and hobbies.
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Assistant Secretary in the Honors Program at my University
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My Pain Will Be My Own (Mature Content) Chapter 3

by Meego on Yesterday at 05:57 PM
Chapter 3

"Ah, Shell, just in time." he says as I walk through the front door. "Arlene, my dar-ling" he sings high to get her attention from the other room. Mother comes in and takes a sweeping assessment of the situation; I have just come home, Henry is done with pre-dinner snack and she is hungry. All is well in her world today. Monday's are his day off and he makes us pre-dinner snacks in hopes of making a new appetizer for his menu. His restaurant is named

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My Pain Will Be My Own (Mature Content) Prologue through Chapter 2

by Meego on Yesterday at 05:55 PM
I'm working on a story. I have never written anything long before and I'm hoping to post sections of it on the forums when I feel ready.

If you would like to post comments (constructive criticism) please keep the following in mind:

Some of my real feelings and experiences will be intermixed in the story I am writing, so please tread softly (no mean posts about subject matter), as "I have spread my
fears under you feet; Tread softly because you tread on my fears"

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