madalyn
Writer

Hellew! Good to see you posting, been a while.

I know nothing about plays, so I don't think I can be much help to you there, sorry . I've read it all, but there's so much content in that excerpt, it's quite difficult to give a helpful response. I'll do my best.

I'm working on about 8 different stories right now. Most are in the very early stages so, may even end up parts of my other stuff, or a collection of short stories.

Ciao for now

Oh no problemo, thanks for the read, really enjoyed it. I only look over things that are worth looking over to be honest. Shingle and Ricket are really funny, I hope they are in it frequently when I read the full novel.

I can't write anything at the moment, this damn Open Office keeps correcting my speech. I can't write accents properly, it's driving me mental

That sounds. . .horrible. I prefer to think they are taken care of with understanding and, maybe even a little love. That annoys me if they are treated like inmates in the place you've seen. Makes me wonder how it is in less prosperous countries. Very sad.

Hope to see some of your script up on here, sounds really interesting.

On a psychiatric ward? That sounds cool. One Flew Over the Cuckoos Nest did that well, but it didn't really tackle the darker side of places like that, you didn't get inside the heads of the patients at all. Maybe some decapitation and doom will help, usually does in everything else.

I'm really into the human mind, and how it can break etc.

Yeah. . .I think we'll have to write a story about bunnies and pretty meadows soon, this might get out of hand

THOO-KA!

Cool, I couldn't handle the pressure of writing a play.

Yeah I'm working on a short story, very David Lynch-ish actually. It's about someone with schizophrenia, all set within their bathroom. Hopefully it will be quite disturbing, in a good way though. Gritty.

FOO-TISH! (That's my kung-fu-kick sound)

This is a very weird hello, no? I didn't pretend to kick you in the head or anything, I was just doing a kick noise. . .

So anyway, are you working on anything?