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    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Bobcat's Yowl: in Poetry
    Very nice. The economization helps.
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    Yesterday, 05:55 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Bobcat's Yowl: in Poetry
    Yes, but even doing that the stanza is really unnecessary and not as interesting as the rest of the piece. Is it absolutely necessary that we know...
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    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Where The River Takes Me in Poetry
    Some thoughts:
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    Squalid Glass replied to a thread The cord is tied in Poetry
    I agree with B's critique. My other issue is "land out". 'Out' does not seem to be the right word there. It's awkward phrasing and rhythmically...
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    Yesterday, 05:41 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Graduation Eve in Poetry
    Thanks for the kind words, Lisa. Here is my edit: Graduation Eve Children litter the darkness, scamper around campus, smash cardboard...
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    Yesterday, 05:39 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Comfort Zone in Poetry
    As of now, this piece is filled with too many cliches - cold as ice, burn like fire, spin like a top, etc. I suggest finding new, original ways to...
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    Yesterday, 05:37 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Bobcat's Yowl: in Poetry
    I think you should cut the first stanza. It's unnecessary because the title sets up the image.
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    Divus replied to a thread The Tyranny of the Mocking Jay Bird in Non-Fiction
    Winston, speaking merely has an old chap - well past his sell by date, I am a bit worried about you day dreaming of caterpillars. But we NFs...
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