Helicio
Scrivener

Cool man, how do I accept it?

Hey! You should accept my friendship offer.

Hey, gonna attack Ch. 2 and 3 later on today and get a crit back at you.

Oh, yeah... watch out for plagiarizers... hence why I only posted Prologue thru Ch. 2.

Thanks, I'll check out the edit. (you know you can click on my name and post on my visitor message wall, don't you?)

And thanks, I hate punctuation nazis. I just say that I noticed errors. If you didn't use a single period, tho, I would tell ya.

I just edited your stuff by the way very nice. Don't listen to the punctuation nazi sometimes punctuation "errors" and such actually strengthen fiction.

haha thanks man

Gotta get used to this site

Figured I'd break you in... don't want to you to be a Visitor Message Virgin for too long.

Hola!