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    05-14-2013, 04:43 PM
    Fats Velvet started a thread Schande in Poetry
    Would you inflict on them your history with all the casual malice of a slack wrist that lashed its letters on your ancestor's back?
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    05-13-2013, 04:55 PM
    Fats Velvet replied to a thread You shall overcome? in Poetry
    I like the way you think, Blade. Thanks ahmuseme and Gumby. Squalid, Bean Counter
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    05-09-2013, 06:28 PM
    Fats Velvet started a thread You shall overcome? in Poetry
    The Boomers' bean-counter culture thought it owned the world, then bought it by merger and acquisition to sell me chunks on loan.
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    04-30-2013, 07:42 PM
    Fats Velvet started a thread My dizzy little dervish in Poetry
    Across the dance floor she whirled like spilled wine spreading, mulled with cidered sweat, my tart to taste. Between songs she approached,...
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    04-30-2013, 07:41 PM
    Fats Velvet replied to a thread I'll Just Be Over Here... in Poetry
    ^ That's the stuff. _______________________________________ She bids me to leap with her into the abyss, daring me to save her from...
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    04-30-2013, 07:25 PM
    Fats Velvet replied to a thread Memorial in Poetry
    Truly appreciated Squalid. I've copied and pasted your comments to a word document to keep as a reminder. Nathan, you are absolutely on point...
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    04-30-2013, 07:16 PM
    Fats Velvet replied to a thread I'll Just Be Over Here... in Poetry
    This is fantastic, baj. Brilliant in many respects. The only significant issues are grammatical: My new “friend” chain smokes. Polishes...
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    04-27-2013, 06:44 PM
    Fats Velvet replied to a thread Memorial in Poetry
    NathanBrazil and Vitaly, to my shame there is no concrete gist to this. It is more evocation than exposition. You both, and amsawtell, pinched the...
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    04-24-2013, 07:14 PM
    Fats Velvet started a thread Memorial in Poetry
    The gallery embalming memory resembles a menagerie of antique grotesqueries. We huff the idyll at a pedestal's foot, synthesize saccharine in...
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    04-22-2013, 07:35 PM
    Fats Velvet replied to a thread What flora does for me in Poetry
    I would feel even more cheated if you made up a suggestion for its own sake, TBK. Glad you enjoyed. You're right amsawtell. I'm working on a...
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    04-22-2013, 06:45 PM
    Fats Velvet replied to a poll "Flying" Voting Thread in Poetry Challenges
    There was an abnormally high number of quality poems submitted for this challenge. People seem to have thrived on the breadth of the theme; mine...
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    Fats! In the History Debate, YOU need to pick one.
    Nah, they're all good points. But just for the sake of argument, you could narrow it down. Some folks here like to argue. So I hear.
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