DarkDyer
Prolific Writer

Hey kiddo
(Oh, "kiddo" is not meant to be patronising. Though when i re-read my crit, I see I said it a few times. Sorry, it is actually a term of endearment. And holds no age.. I call my Mum kiddo sometimes. Haha)

Thank you for critting my work. Glad you thought it was funny. I have decided it is rubbish and needs to be binned. - Haha not really, just needs some serious improving. I am very critical of my own work. And others'. I hope I was helpful in my bitchiness. x

*smooch*

Thanks for the new link...will check it out as soon as I can!!!

Just glad they're useful!

Name of the Wind is brilliant. I laughed my self silly when he threw himself off the roof in front of Elodin.

hi DD, i've had a look but haven't had time to crit it as i have been rather busy, I like what i see and will crit it tomorrow.

I love critting alright! I just was asked to help with edits for the Oddville Press, so I've been working on a short edit for their upcoming eZine. It's tough work, but I love it!


One thing, Dark. The link you posted on my site isn't working. Do you think you might post it again for me?

hey DD, i heard you wanted to join the group man.

sure, i'll get right on it.

Edit: the link doesn't work

Hey Dark. I will get right on that piece you posted. I am in the process of fulfilling a couple other obligations, but you are at the top of my list, dude!

Hey, I left you a critique. I wasn't exactly gentle now that I read it again. Don't let me break ya! You're a great kid with a lot of promise. I think I got that across as well. xx