DarkDyer
Prolific Writer

I completed a critique of your first chapter.

Told you.

I think I'm going to start a new story from scratch. The principle was good, but it fucking sucked technically and creatively.

Round 2; ding, ding, ding.

Looking for the next few chapters of your Clover's Curse... can you send me some links?

Actually, chapter 15 is the one I just finished. It's in the fiction section along with chapter 14 and 13 I believe...

Wait for it... wait for it... wai- aha! Right there. Told you so!

Oh God, they're horrible! Avert your eyes! Ah!!!

No problem buddy! I'll be reading your chapter one very, very soon. I may not be able to complete a critique but I'll try (busy).

I'll be posting up chapter three of my story (which sucks so far) pretty soon. Mind if I ask you to read that for me and give me advice?

Cheers!

Well fair greetings master josh dyer.

How goes your day? no doubt enthrawling, considering i spend time actually thinking of the word enthrawling to compliment you.
Just be impressed and understand that i am all that is wrong with this world.