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Why hate for the predator ? Or--was it really fear ?....Good job though. I love the images you created and that you kept this simple ...perfect for...

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MaggieMoo - 10-25-2011 08:49 AM - permalink View Conversation

Ha ha. True that. Thanks for the vote of confidence.
Anyway, I will get around to editing it any time soon.
Thanks for all your tips though. I will definitely take them on, when editing. Really do appreciate it.
MaggieMoo - 10-25-2011 08:34 AM - permalink View Conversation

I have been told that I am not that good... Ha ha, we'll see.
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Hello there. I just want to thank you kindly for leaving a message on my first poem posted on this site and for your sincere response. To be honest I didn't think anyone would respond. Ha ha. Thanks.
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Sorry I only just read this. Maybe I am a sulky over sensitive teen? I couldn't stop writing even if it is all total rubbish, but thanks for writing to me
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Haha. I used to be obsessed with all things anime back in the day.
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Hell yes! Awesome. Haha. That's my favorite thing in poetry.

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A tough decisision for a slight revision

by Chiefspider on 05-16-2011 at 03:43 AM

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OK I recently received some critique for a recent poem I posted so I tried a revision, but before I post it I'd like a second opinion so here is the original and revised.

World - Original-

a new beginning in a world unspoken
robbed of perfection, it has become man made
ended by fate tis a world now broken
tainted by gods greatest creation, it has become menace
distraught over destruction , they thrive to correct
the deeds are done, sins

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