BoredMormon
Scrivener

BoredMormon! How are you?

Hi! I heard you have a book coming out from Deseret books? How do you get a deal from them anyway? do you send them manuscripts and stuff?

New chapter: http://www.writingforums.com/writers...ml#post1306137

New chapter post: http://www.writingforums.com/writers...apter-3-a.html

It's somewhere on the bottom.

I have something new up: http://www.writingforums.com/writers...ml#post1302715

Hi.

New chapter: http://www.writingforums.com/writers...ml#post1301591

Just the first part. More to come.

Hey Moron. I wrote a short story. Here's the link if you ever get the chance to look at it: http://www.writingforums.com/writers...ve-moment.html

Thanks.

hi BM

Thanks for the critique!

I see on your new Sebus you have quite a few critiques. I don't think there is really going to be anything I could add. So, if you don't mind, I'll return your crit when you post a new piece up.

Just send me a message when you put something up or if you would prefer it if I took a look at your current Sebus.

Thanks,
CS

Mormon, I posted Everstil's first chapter with the changes you recommended. I also put a new chapter 2 up.

Thanks!