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Old 06-23-2008, 08:32 PM   #1
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"Cannabis" ; Alternative, Hard Rock

I posted this song on my website(D.F. Rucci’s Writing) about a week ago it has gotten some fairly good feedback so tell me what you guys think about it!
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hey man, you have to wait your turn
Cause the flowers are blooming
Light the plant and it’ll stir
Giving you bad dreams
Smoke rings, and the birds’ll sing
Making you happy
Live fast, then slow down
Cause the high is melting
Make no promises to me
When you’re choking on this weed


*Chorus*
Why can’t I speak?
I know you know I want you
So let’s get some cannabis
Cause I want you, I want you
Some Cannabis
I love you, I love it


Crazy, dance with birds and bees
The whole room is fogging
Take your red eye grin, and run
Cause you’re giving me bad dreams
You have an itch that needs a scratch
But your nails aren’t working
Puff that beautiful green leaf
And leave here flying…
Up high! Then you fall down
You’re hopelessly crashing…


*Chorus*
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Old 06-28-2008, 02:13 AM   #2
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Superb job man. Right on. Especially:

Make no promises to me
When you’re choking on this weed

and the entire last verse. Fresh as hell. I'm uplifted by another song involving cannabis thats actually inventive, very appropriate
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Old 06-28-2008, 02:22 AM   #3
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Superb job man. Right on. Especially:

Make no promises to me
When you’re choking on this weed

and the entire last verse. Fresh as hell. I'm uplifted by another song involving cannabis thats actually inventive, very appropriate
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Old 06-28-2008, 10:20 PM   #4
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Superb job man. Right on. Especially:

Make no promises to me
When you’re choking on this weed

and the entire last verse. Fresh as hell. I'm uplifted by another song involving cannabis thats actually inventive, very appropriate
thanks a lot man, glad to hear you liked it!
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Old 06-30-2008, 09:14 AM   #5
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Old 07-02-2008, 11:47 AM   #6
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I really like it; perfectly describes it.
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Old 07-05-2008, 04:55 PM   #7
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sounds good to me man
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Old 07-07-2008, 11:29 AM   #8
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By the way, this isn't really have to do anything with this, but Nefieslab, I really, really like your signature/banner. XD
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