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Old 06-18-2008, 03:54 PM   #1
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Madison Rose

Ah well. I haven't posted in a really long time, but I miss this place. Don't hold back!

Crunch went the bones of the skin
In the dark of the night
Rigged stainless steel and the promise
To flee at first light
A story begins about a girl
Who was too weak to fight
It goes on and on and she's
Fighting for her life

Madison Rose
Which way you heading
Madison Rose
Won't you get lost
Madison Rose
You keep returning
And nobody knows
Which way you're heading

Crunch went the glass of the bottle
She keeps by her right
Exhausted bike fumes just like
How she feels inside
She met a guy who put it
All out for her
They go out and out and she's
Falling faster

Madison Rose
Which way you heading
Madison Rose
Won't you get lost
Madison Rose
You keep returning
And nobody knows
Which way you're heading

Flash came the spring of the
Year she'd started to dread
Her birthday rolled around
Like the thoughts rolling in her head
She's one third there
Only two more thirds to go
She remembers all their faces
But too late for Miss Madison Rose

Madison Rose
Which way you heading
Madison Rose
Won't you get lost
Madison Rose
You keep returning
And nobody knows
Which way you're heading

Boom went the sound of the gun
Playing little tricks on her
Far too long with the song of suffering
In her ear
Her hair turned gray with no more
Traces of red
Her eyes already faded since the night
She found her mother dead

Madison Rose
Which way you heading
Madison Rose
Won't you get lost
Madison Rose
You keep returning
And nobody knows
Why you won't stop
We've all been told
You're a lost cause
But nobody knows
Madison Rose
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Old 06-30-2008, 08:43 AM   #2
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At first glance I thought it was going to suck, but it looks good. I like the chorus with the repetition as well as the darkness of the verses, good job on it
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Old 07-02-2008, 12:12 PM   #3
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thank you! sometimes i feel the verses came a little too close to being cliched but i tried to stay away from it as much as possible.
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