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Old 06-07-2008, 12:54 PM   #1
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Lost Curse.

Lost Curse



Like falling down the deepest hole,
Nails gripping to the edges,
You crawl whilst your crying soul,
Slowly drops to the floor,

What will you do?
How will you do it?
This ever-lasting curse binds your mind,
Be careful what you’ll find,

Escaping danger,
A plan made in heaven,
Formulated in hell,
Yet destined to go well,

Unforgiving and broken,
Swallowed by the words spoken,
Running through doors,
Embraced by your curse,
The urge to escape,
The urge to break,
The urge to be free,
Just you and me,

Shadows creeping around corners,
There silence echoed like screams,
Closing my eyes as they are,
Eating away at my dreams,

What can they do?
What will they do to me?
The glimpse of a crucial cure,
As my soul slowly falls to the floor,

Looking back,
Lost curses dying,
Prison guards crying,
As I’m smiling,

Unforgiving and broken,
Swallowed by the words spoken,
Running through doors,
Embraced by your cause,
The urge to escape,
The urge to break,
The urge to be free,
Just you and me,

You, me…
And a lost curse.
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Old 06-11-2008, 02:44 PM   #2
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Good song, the style of music I'm into. I just don't feel its up to par with the other songs you have posted up recently. Good nonetheless though.
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