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Old 05-22-2008, 07:56 PM   #1
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Begalion Catharsis

This is one of my more, well, escapist-as-some-of-you-might-want-to-call-it lyric, but to me its just a fantasy piece with a light lesson and meaning and its just for fun and power metal, which I've been very into the past few days. Dazzling piano accompaniment and streaming power chords aside, I actually do want to take some pride in the arrangement of the language here, so I need points of view before I add it onto the album list.
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Begalion Catharsis -

The elves hide in their sacred forest
Far away, secluded from mankind
The men they ready to storm... their trees and castles
Deep from within Begalion

Ready their bows they steel their blades
Metal clashing to the drumbeat of the brave
Hear the cannons roar, the forest creaking
Trees are falling, there is fire, and our storm is brewing

Light the fire, lead the way
We will follow with the roar of marching
The lion's jaw has opened today
And off and on we go

Skin their hides and kill their women
Their children make good slaves
We’ll teach them well in our quarries
That abyss will be their maze

Our fault is human, we cannot tell the future
For the elves they lie in wait
They are more in number, and skill abundant
And there is no doubt that we shall fall

And they will march, on our golden walls
And they will take our lands
The final fort, Begalion, will the grave built by our hand

[And so it was, that the elves cleaned their forest of the taint of men]

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While certainly carries more meaning than many power metal fantasy lyrics....it has no place on your album, or at least, so I judge from the three lyrics I've read at this point. While it carries the same meaning, it is such a massive divergent...it'll stand about a mile out totally destroy the flow of the album. Other than that I have no real opinion on it, just power metal lyrics, which I've never really thought much of anyway.
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Thats what caught me too, that its too different from everything else, I guess it'll remain as a concept album idea.
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