T.W. North

Note: Okay, this is meant to be one of those heavy enders on a metal album...think March To The Shore by In Flames and you pretty much have my influence. Enjoy.

You squeeze my hand-held heart
And pass it around for all to see
Bite out a taste testing chunk
Spit it, throw it away

Don't you dare, give me a kiss goodbye
I'll come back, don't you worry, stronger than ever

You give me a moment to grieve
Then send me in for another round
Smile at me, I see it in your eyes
Screw it, cut them away

Don't you dare, give me a kiss goodbye
I'll come back, don't you worry, stronger than ever

Is this how you treat everyone?
Is this how you get around?
You feed off me

Don't you dare, give me a kiss goodbye
I'll come back, don't you worry, stronger than ever

Tom

I like, what I'm interpreting as a 2 line chorus, the chorus alot and the verses have alot of imagery included within them. Personally, as a pure metal hater, the lyrics are a little grose my liking, but to others Im sure they'd agree its well structured. Would be better however if it were a tad longer.

Tom.

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Damian_Rucci

Very nice, it does fit well with the end of the album slammer. Nice work.

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