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Old 05-16-2008, 03:44 PM   #1
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Look in the Mirror.

Look in the Mirror

Look in the mirror, I dare you,
What do you see and who are you?
But more importantly,
Who will you become?

It’s been said that dreams don’t make it,
So close but you always break it,
And there’s nothing else to do but run,

I’ve heard rumours about love,
And how it can help you become,
But like the rest of them it’s nothing but a lie,

Look in the mirror, I dare you,
What do you see and who are you?
But more importantly,
Who will you become? X 2

Peer outside for a moment,
Can’t you see them in torment?
Wrestling with the past, present and future,

Don’t you watch them through the window?
Knowing things that they just won’t know,
Because they’re too desperate to figure out the truth,

Look in the mirror, I dare you,
What do you see and who are you?
But more importantly,
Who will you become? X 2

Because I don’t care,
About whom you are,
I don’t care because…

Look in the mirror, I dare you,
What do you see and who are you?
But more importantly,
Who will you become? X 2
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I like the catchiness of the song but at time I fell that some of the words clog up the rhythm. very good, keep it up!
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Old 05-17-2008, 03:32 PM   #3
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Old 05-17-2008, 05:44 PM   #4
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I like the simplicity of the song. Very good
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