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Old 05-13-2008, 02:52 PM   #1
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Verse One
When the shadows abduct you, and there’s nothing you can do,
When the whispers threaten, and you’ve done what you can,
Who’s going to save you? Who’s going to find you?
Probably not me,
It’ll be,
Superman!

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But who cares if he’s stronger,
Holds his breathe for longer,
Or even shoots out fire from his eyes.

Does it matter that he’s faster,
Stops natural disasters,
Wears a cape and can fly?

Chorus
He’s a liar, one big lie,
It doesn’t matter if he cannot die,
He’s a liar, to his friends,
Don’t care about the messages he sends,
No matter how fast he’d just ran,
They like me more than Superman,
Superman, Superman…

After the villains entrap me, their wrath to strong to break,
After they’ve formulated their plans, too kill what they can,
Who goes to stop it? Who’s going to help me escape?
Probably not me,
It’ll be,
Superman!

BRIDGE

CHORUS X2



I know, I know, this is a very strange one, but believe me, I've had such a lack of ideas for lyrics, I decided to get what I could on paper. Sorry, but im open to any comments, thanks in advance.



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Old 05-13-2008, 03:56 PM   #2
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I like it but my only problem is that it seems that rhyming has constricted the lyrics. It just seems like your forcing the rhymes.
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Old 05-14-2008, 01:21 AM   #3
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^I disagree, considering the topic, the rhymes are about as good as you're gonna get. While I like the concept of being better than Superman, I dont get how superman ever lied to his friends...I can understand how he is a lie...but not a liar.
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Old 05-14-2008, 09:20 AM   #4
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I think because he has to keep that he's superman away from his friends, even though a few of them do know. It's not lying really, but just as good as a lie, by not telling them.
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Thus it doesn't make sense to the song material.
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