CodyKun

The summer wind dies slowly
You touch the leaves of white cherry blooms
It is the white sun above that opens my eyes to who I am

I spin around and around
I fall down to the ground
But still I’m able to soar oh so high
I am a mad masochist
You are my sweet sadist
It’s a partnership designed in the heavens

The white skin on your shoulders,
I want to violate every inch of you
But the days become shorter,
And you vanish like the Cherry blossoms

If I can search for you now
If I wait for a year
Will you re-appear as you were before
I know deep down inside, you are a ghost from the past
But I also know what it feels like
To never have loved

“All pieces of the puzzle are broken and maimed…I see how softly you flow through the scenery…the pieces of the puzzle will vanish and disintegrate with time…but this love….this love…”

And Though the day grows longer, you still dissapear
I wait anxiously to see you again
The broken sunlight pierces through the trees, and your face reappears to my rejoicement

And though the sun revolves
And though the moon turns red
I stand still in time until you appear
When the deed has been done, and you disappear for good
What will I do? Crying in the rain of cherry blossom leaves? OH!

I reach into the heavens
I reach for your hand
I reach for……『 ……………… 』

NOTES

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* The title is a rough translation. The song itself will actually be in Japanese. *The quoted part is spoken in the song, not sung.

T.W. North

Hmm, while the first three paragraphs are excellent, particularly 2 and 3, after that it seems to go nowhere and falls into generic clicheness. Might want to work on that.

CodyKun

ah..I see what you mean...It's kind of hard to write lyrics in a story sense...well, not so much in a story as it is to try to tell the story from the veiwpoint of one character.