ThePhoenix

VERSE
When all the feelings come crashing in
And I don't know where to begin
All these questions start flowing again
And I'm still thinking this might have to end

CHORUS
I'm sorry, hurting you feels more like killing myself
I guess you could say I need time
to sort my mind
and realize those feelings were true

VERSE
Don't worry, I know you can move on
And I know you can love again
I just hope we can stay friends

CHORUS

VERSE
So go ahead, reach those dreams of yours,
I know you can touch the stars if you want to,
I would only be holding you back
yeah...it would hurt for a while
But all wounds heal over time

CHORUS

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So go ahead, reach those dreams of yours,
I know you can touch the stars if you want to

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ThePhoenix

anybody???

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Damian_Rucci

I'm kind of stuck on this, you could of use some more imagery, that would really help this peace.

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Crash_Tomas

it has a good topic, just, as damian said, more imagery.

But, I dunno how anybody can tell someone else to write what they want to say.

so, just do whatever comes best to you.

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