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Old 04-26-2008, 09:07 PM   #1
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Deceptive Limb

I'm not so sure about the last line of Chorus 3 but whatever. This is a song based around a general concept of nostalgia, memories, and space, that I've been doing for fun. I might post the others later (although one of them is rather long: 1,165 words, lol). Don't worry, this is short

(VERSE 1):

My eyes gravitate toward the stars
A fascination with the intangible
I can feel their mysterious powers bleeding
Out into space and into the atmosphere
I take a deep breath to hold it in
For as long as I can


(CHORUS 1):

I never want to let it go
Stuck in a gravitational pull
But eventually I'll be thrown out
Back into the endless borders of space


(VERSE 2):

My heart meanders up a twisted path
Snaking around the trunks of ancient trees
Old friends with barely recognizable faces
Stare down at me coercing me to stop
I halt at a smiling, beckoning tree
For as long as I can


(CHORUS 2):

I never want to let it go
Stuck in a mellifluous breeze
But eventually it will die down
And I'll be alone in a barren field


(BRIDGE):

My mind carries me across a winter landscape
The trees to my sides collapse under the snow
Their eyes and their smiles gone
The stars and planets above me begin to move
At first slipping toward me then swallowed whole


(CHORUS 1):

I never want to let it go
Stuck in a gravitational pull
But eventually I'll be thrown out
Back into the endless borders of space


(CHORUS 2):

I never want to let it go
Stuck in a mellifluous breeze
But eventually it will die down
And I'll be alone in a barren field


(CHORUS 3):

I don't want to ever let it go
Tearing my hands back from the outstretched limb
I lower my head and scrape off the frozen tears
Solidified onto my skin like the memories in my heart
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