ShadowZero007

Its based on a book called the Stand by Stephen king
(if you've read it the title probably gave it away)


Verse1
Throat Swells a deathly black
life will soon be the lack
this world stumbles on captain trips
bitter sweet immunity kissed thy lips

Chorus
He Strides South US 51
The Dark man he lies
far in the west
The Dark man he lies
far far in the west
Mouth agape fangs at the bare
take a stand if you dare

Verse 2
No past No memory
He guides to dark divinity
The flawed stones red stare
oh ad hoc beware
Take your stand if you dare

Chorus
He Strides South US 51
The Dark man he lies
far in the west
The Dark man he lies
far far in the west
Mouth agape fangs at the bare
take a stand if you dare

Bridge (Said very softly as if reading from the book)
baby can you dig your man
Sunny cornfields forever
the oldest woman ive ever seen
and the wolves would serve him


Chorus
He Strides South US 51
The Dark man he lies
far in the west
The Dark man he lies
far far in the west
Mouth agape fangs at the bare
take a stand if you dare

Verse 3
Take It! Take-Take Take it!
Make your stand in dark mans land
a flawed black stone dont stand alone
In Dark mans land
Purged By gods hand....

Chorus
He Strides South US 51
The Dark man he lies
far in the west
The Dark man he lies
far far in the west
Mouth agape fangs at the bare
take a stand if you dare


Outro (Once again whispered)
Randall flagg?
Russel Farreday?
Ran- Fla-
russ-
RF......RF.....R.....F....
(Music Fades out)

nacreous

On the positive side, woah, its almost like Steven King wrote this poem.
On the negative side, woah, its almost like Steven King wrote this poem.
Keep writing! Cheers.

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kidstaple

Dude! Awesome! I like how you added in a lot of information from the book. When I saw that someone had written a song based on Randall Flagg, I had thought that it was going to be written by someone who thought they were writing something good, that had nothing to do with him, but I have to say, that was quite easily the most amazing thing I've read today! Cheers and can't wait to see what more comes from you!

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ShadowZero007

haha yeah I finished the book about 3 weeks back.
I liked it alot but the ending seemed a bit anti climatic

In the way of other lyrics ive only come up with another verse for a diff song so far

This ones just about a big brawl

Lets just get on with the brawl
hell lets make it a good ol free for all
My fist flys to the left and then to the right
a foot collides with my head, time to say goodnight

RSBtenchar

I was excited when I saw Randall Flag as the title, and I'm glad you did not disspaoint (I was afraid at first, but it seems good). The only problem I have would be with the first verse:

Although having a rhyme scheme can be good, it is not necessary and I personally found that the second line was being forced to rhyme with the first. Other than that, I loved it. Good job man. I need to read the book (so far I've just seen the movie, but I've so many books to catch up on, I keep putting it off, lol).

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