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Old 04-14-2008, 04:22 PM   #1
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The Death of a Tragic Hero

I'll walk in on you and him
and I'll hide myself in this tomb again
Beg for my forgiveness for a third time
But I'm gone, existing only in my mind

*And this will be the death of a tragic hero
I had that one fatal flaw
You'll cut out my heart, and serve it on a platter
But it can't, because it was never really there. *

And now I'll walk
Walk down this lonley road
slow and steady steps I will take
Untill I fall off the end of my fate

*chorus*
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Old 04-15-2008, 01:30 AM   #2
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Well, it's not that interesting, you structure all your songs the same, they all have the same flow and wording (if not the actual words)...and please, PLEASE stop with the pretentious titles.
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