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Old 04-13-2008, 09:51 PM   #1
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Reflection Shown

Reflection Shown

Every morning you come around
With dreams fresh in your head
Notice how alone you feel
Waking in a nightmare instead

The dark room surrounds you
A chill runs through your veins
You can’t keep moving on by
As you try to numb the pain

Must’ve been asleep for all these years
You’ve been not able to see the way
For all the lies that have gone through you
Have caused your path to stray

Step out, breathe all the air in
Can’t help but recall all that’s gone
Your reflection shines right through you
As if your not good enough at all

Look through all the faces that pass
Is there one you even know?
Can they see right through you?
If they can, you let them go

Tread through the shattered parts
Of what’s left of your soul
Find out where this had to start
‘Cause you feel like not worth saving at all

Anything that was left just seems to drift away
No matter how hard you try
This feeling with you will stay

These thoughts that can’t escape your mind
Are the ones that will hold you behind
Say that you were wrong
That you can still be strong
Just look inside for the words long gone

Step out, breathe all the air in
Can’t help but recall all that’s gone
Your reflection shines right through you
As if you can’t feel a thing at all

Every morning you come around
With dreams fresh in your head
Feel these thoughts you have inside
Will you choose to dream instead?

If so, lay your head down to sleep
And close your eyes once more
Drift off so you won’t be able to feel
All the pain left anymore

Step out, breathe all the air in
Can’t help but think of what's been done
Your reflection shines back to you
'Cause you've choosen to live out the dreams to come
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Old 04-16-2008, 07:41 PM   #2
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I really like it...

one thing though
Quote:
You’ve been not able to see the way
I would just switch it to be

You’ve not been able to see the way

I don't know, it might help the flow a little bit... *Shrugs*
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