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Old 04-12-2008, 05:55 PM   #1
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Elegy to a Passing Ghost

So, this is a song I wrote a while ago...I was pretty depressed when I wrote it... Its acoustic, I have the guitar written for it... What do you think???


Hello world, hello friends and family
I’m sorry for the things that have been done
this path has been set in motion
This fall can not be stopped

So stay safe, and don’t worry
Because I’ll be waiting for you
waiting for you, waiting for you
just past that bright white light
waiting for you in the afterlife

Tell the world, tell my friends and family
it’s no their fault, and it’s not an insult
I just can’t go on lieing to myself
lieing about being happy, and falling in love...


???advice, coments, etc???
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