Zig-Zag - Writers Forum

Mr. Interstellar · 04-08-2008, 08:24 PM

I believe that the sky is yellow.
I think of myself to be a monkey.
I buy XL shirt for the newborn.
I take suggestion from the junkie.

I always zig in this world
When I must zag.
People call me a weirdo,
I am happy with the tag.

I like to read the book wrong way up.
I demand Grammy for singing off-key.
I lock up the butterflies in my stomach.
And I ask them to pay me the rental fee.

I always zig in this world
When I have to zag.
People call me a weirdo,
I am happy with the tag.

I find divine peace in the traffic jam.
I do wear the “boats like” shoes.
If I ever get married in this lifetime,
I want my honeymoon to take place in the Zoo.

I always zig in this world
When I am supposed to zag.
People call me a weirdo,
I am happy with the tag.

Damian_Rucci · 04-10-2008, 04:56 PM

I love this! This is pure greatness, the chorus is strong yet subtle and the verses are fantastic. I can relate to this song. Good job man!

ThePhoenix · 04-12-2008, 06:06 PM

Nice work...do you have any music written for it??? I'de love to hear it with some tunes...

Mystery · 04-13-2008, 05:37 AM

Great!

You are using every tool everyone else here seems to have let collect dust in their shed, but most of all it's brilliant because it's lateral and indirect. It's got a hint of sarcasm and theres a satirical jest about it. Good work.

Mr. Interstellar · 04-27-2008, 06:50 PM

Thanks a bunch guys! Your feedbacks mean a lot to me. This was actually written for my band ages ago when I was in high school.