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Old 03-27-2008, 12:55 PM   #1
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Wait.

wait ive got something to say and
wait i think there is something going wrong

i know i know i know i know but then again i really really dont know

wait stop look listen to what ive got to say everything around here seems to be going your way i know i know i know i know but then again i really just dont care
two time one two times one he shouted into his phone
you just dont understand a thing i wish things had started before they finished

wait stop look listen to what i got to say
everything thats happened recently has been your mistake
i dont think that you could be anymore arrogant
im in control no im in control but then again ive lost all of my control

two time one two times one he shouted into his phone
you just dont understand a thing i wish things had started before they finished

two time one two times one he shouted into his phone
you just dont understand a thing i wish things had started before they finished.

This is another Indie style song.
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Old 03-27-2008, 02:39 PM   #2
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i find its too much repetition, especially with the "i kno"
yea,and i find the format is fairly odd, but whatever fits u
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Old 03-27-2008, 07:08 PM   #3
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your entitled to an opinion Even if you are a woman! lol.
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