ShabookiSkittles

Why must men die?
Why must men.....cry over death?
and how will we know when we are.......
breathing our last breath?

- Chorus
*An uncertain future...woahoohoohooh
It's what lies ahead of me
and what lies ahead of us all...
but always.....what lies ahead of me.....*

Why do times change?
Why do friends.....go seperate ways?
Good feelings slowly subside...
until the end of days

Why do men hate?
Why can't men...change like the times?
The answer is lost because....
we left it behind.

*Chorus*

No man can know
All that will....happen tommorow
It may leave us happy...
or fill us with sorrow.

An uncertain future....
My fear goes unsaid....
I'll face what's ahead....
The answers lie not behind us...
Yet the answers won't come and find us
They lie within the future....
The uncertain future.....
which lies ahead offffffff me.....

I have actually recorded an audio of the first verse and the chorus. If you want to listen to it to give you a general idea of how the song would sound in its entirety this is the link http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/117088 (Lol, I can't sing )

kaytea111

the lyrics are alright..
"An uncertain future...woahoohoohooh" <----i like that line,I dont know why, I just do
"It's what lies ahead of me
and what lies ahead of us all...
but always.....what lies ahead of me....."<--I dont like this... You make it too self-centered aand "ha, in your face, its more what lies ahead of me!" and i dont think its very nice. because its whatlies ahead of us all. dont make yourself feel special..

other than that, i dont care much for these lyrics. there is quite a bit of repitition, you just changed a few words or whatever. and you seem to focus on men?you should try usin "people"or something dirrecting it towards people in general rather than gender. But why did you use "men"?

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ShabookiSkittles

and you seem to focus on men?you should try usin "people"or something dirrecting it towards people in general rather than gender. But why did you use "men"?

It's quite common in writing to use "men" in reference to "Mankind". Rest assured I am not sexist (I knew the doctor was the mother in the "Boy and his father get in a car accident, Father dies, boy goes to the hospital, Doctor says I can't perform on him, "he's my son".) lol. I wasn't trying to be ignorant I just tend to use the word men in reference to humanity quite offend. Sorry if I offended you!