Vasque

I haven't written in a few months, at least. Here is some unfinished work I can't tell if is worth the effort to finish. Seems like I have an innovative idea, but not sure it'll work as is. Any input appreciated, especially "from the hip" critiques. I'm thinking country on this one.

Hope all is well with everyone.


Having Affairs with My Wife


I picked her up at a bar across town
One Friday she said she was reading
at her ladies book club meeting

Found her out the week before
‘Cause I was suspecting things
Never seen her do much thinking

She packed her book and drove away
But she pulled into a road side bar
And left her book inside the car

Instead of hiding in the shadows
This time I wore a disguise
And in the dark she never realized

Chorus:
Every book club friday night
I put on a diff’rent disguise
Pick her up at that run down bar
Stocked full of sleazy guys
I take her to a cheap hotel
Only let her see me in twilight
I tell ya man…
I’m having affairs with my wife

After a few too many
Man that old girl is all mine
Can’t believe she falls for those lines

Don’t even have to cuddle
‘Cause right after I give her a call
When I’m getting ice out in the hall


Spoken:
“Baby are ya having fun
Is the book meeting about thru?
I miss you baby, come home soon”

*Chorus*

Verse

Verse

*Chorus*

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kaytea111

wow, interesting concept
so the husband dresses up differently every week when his wife goes to a "Book club" and then he "picks her up" pretending to be someone else. Yet she doesnt know??

I like it, I was kinda etchy at first because it sounded weird but when I got the the fourth stanza and chorus it made more sense...

I think you should continue the song

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