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Old 03-17-2008, 03:51 PM   #1
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Mistake

Verse

Sorry for making you leave,
For turning away
As you knock on my door
But i need to be strong
And i need to move on with my life,

We left it all to chance,
Holding hands, locking lips
Maybe the odds were all stacked against me
From the very start

We left it all to fate
But baby, it's seriously too hard to take
anymore

Chorus
I am sorry, really sorry.
But i love you way too much
Dont wanna be the one
who brings you down

I am sorry, really sorry
but i love you way too much
Dont wanna be the one
who brings you down

Verse

Sorry for making you leave,
For turning away
As you knock on my door
But i need to be strong
And i need to move on with my life,

We left it all to chance,
Holding hands, locking lips
Maybe the odds were all stacked against me
From the very start

It was a.. mistake....













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Old 03-18-2008, 02:44 AM   #2
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hey, it's a fine lyrics. but i think you've overused the word "sorry" . it will get kind of repetitive and boring if you sing that word too many times in the song.
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