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Old 03-04-2008, 05:05 PM   #1
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Life On The Ground

reverse this atrophy
make life the way it was supposed to be
make my aging hopes a reality
before they leave me

can you reshape me?
can you take from me?
those things i don't want to be
like the smoke, blackens the blue sky
over this life looking up
will i survive?
will these fires subside in time?

reverse this atrophy
make life the way it was supposed to be
make my aging hopes a reality
before they leave me

the distance grows greater
a new day, another step

the heart of failure
beating ever stronger
birth to life without wings
what can i change?
can i yet leave the cage?
or will this be a life spent dying?

This song has a bit of an experimental format. Its almost backwards, because it goes chorus, bridge, chorus, verses. I'm not sure if I want to add another stanza in there, but I might.
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Old 03-04-2008, 05:24 PM   #2
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just completely LOVE IT!
and ide think it would be nice with another stanza.
good job
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Old 03-08-2008, 12:34 AM   #3
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Yes, yes, yes

This is it. Thats what Im talking about. (this is awesome)

"birth to life without wings", is such rewarding imagery.

I am not a loss for words, your song has my head filled with them.
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Old 03-08-2008, 04:17 PM   #4
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Thank you, glad you guys like it!
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