Flabby O'Flannagan

reverse this atrophy
make life the way it was supposed to be
make my aging hopes a reality
before they leave me

can you reshape me?
can you take from me?
those things i don't want to be
like the smoke, blackens the blue sky
over this life looking up
will i survive?
will these fires subside in time?

reverse this atrophy
make life the way it was supposed to be
make my aging hopes a reality
before they leave me

the distance grows greater
a new day, another step

the heart of failure
beating ever stronger
birth to life without wings
what can i change?
can i yet leave the cage?
or will this be a life spent dying?

This song has a bit of an experimental format. Its almost backwards, because it goes chorus, bridge, chorus, verses. I'm not sure if I want to add another stanza in there, but I might.

kaytea111

just completely LOVE IT!
and ide think it would be nice with another stanza.
good job

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Gnomes Amok

Yes, yes, yes

This is it. Thats what Im talking about. (this is awesome)

"birth to life without wings", is such rewarding imagery.

I am not a loss for words, your song has my head filled with them.

Flabby O'Flannagan

Thank you, glad you guys like it!