A Brilliant Night - Writers Forum

james_v02 · 03-03-2008, 12:58 AM

A Brilliant Night

Comes another night
you're all alone,
can't believe you're still waiting

Can't you see?
It can't be any better
even if she remembers the first kiss

All she
needs to know
is all you
want to say

All she
ever wants
is you
is you

<CHORUS>
But I will miss
the way I used to be.
Now,I'm staring at the
reflection of myself
And I will miss
the way we used to talk.
Now,we're staring at each other
saying nothing at all,nothing at all.

For a moment,
your eyes set on hers
it had come to be a brilliant night for her

Whispers and tears
from afar and
I'll walk away 'cause this night is not for me.

<CHORUS>

What I should have said
I didnt say (2x)
Goodbye

<CHORUS>

All she
needs to know
is all you
have to say.

kaytea111 · 03-03-2008, 06:03 PM

this song is alright, nothing real interestin, like its sweet and all but pretty short. The lines have no depth. It seems like you were makin an effort for depth but jus let it flow...im sure you will do better next time.