Stolid in Application only. - Writers Forum

Mevalgre · 03-02-2008, 06:51 PM

Its like I've lost all control
Been finding my way all month
Only to notice that every path I choose
With every day I lose
Moves farther from my other options
Into moments that are soon forgotten
Til the schizophrenetic directions
become this tangled mass of cables
and I just can't find the input anymore

Since when have things been this complex
Synapses pummeling, turning past into next
So here I go headlong into that wall again
Right out the other side
Broken into the swan dive
While the ironic side laughs
Knowing I've always just been
Along for the ride

angel23 · 03-03-2008, 09:46 PM

Wow, I really like this. Partly because I can identify with it - at least, with my own interpretation of it - but mostly because I think you get the point across well, yet still leaving enough complexity for others to form their own idea of the deeper meaning.

Mevalgre · 03-04-2008, 10:05 PM

thank you. I was going to write more. but I think it might be better left unexplained. Just really torn between 2 directions my life is going and doing that kind of .. "one foot on each distancing train" thing.