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02-22-2008, 11:34 AM
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Echo
# [1] Spoken,, an eager whisper returns from a dead kiss that was unwilling to stay the same… A living memory has reflected just to hope for a change… Repelled by a souls surface,, would it have been forbidden if I just could have stayed… Shhh,, do you hear it returning… It couldn’t be…. * [A] An Echo from a cavern of history… A pronounced promise recreated to remind you of your sincerity… Echo, A resonating reoccurrence of what was lost in your life that is still missing… Echo, imitating what I once said so long ago still reverberating in my empty life… Good bye, good bye… sweet dream eternal… Echo… Echo…. # [2] How deep the abyss of my emptiness expand throughout me… Hollowed by my dark demons, shadow reminders of what once was and could’ve been… A missing substance causes the sound to return… What your hearing comes from the past… Shhh,, do you hear it returning… Couldn’t it stay forever hidden….
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02-22-2008, 06:29 PM
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I am slightly unclear whether Spoken,, and ...Echo are performance instructions or part of the lyric. I have the feeling you should get out more.
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02-23-2008, 03:42 AM
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Hello.
Ok... For one I am no Poet... I am Nothing that would be considered as beautiful, coming from my mouth anyways... Please don't consider me as trying to stand up next, or compare myself to" anyone who post anything here"........... I am A Total Beginner.... Revel in that.... Ive been doing this for only a year... I don't claim to be a poet. Or any type of accomplished lyricist... I DO know that what i write comes strait from my heart and life.... whether i spell it right or not... So mister buckle......... My Life exp, Or how much i get out has nothing to do with this Sir... I am here just to vent, and out of curiosity... But who am i to infringe? " No One " So Maybe I took this way out of context.... Or maybe i don't know what the frick context is!!!.... But I will Still Pull the skin away... Because all I write is life and feeling.... So... I don't really understand why i should get out more... Is is my grammar? or something along those lines?... Please make it more clear to me... So that we can truly converse.
Sleepy.....
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02-23-2008, 04:06 AM
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Hello.
Ok... For one I am no Poet... I am Nothing that would be considered as beautiful, coming from my mouth anyways... Please don't consider me as trying to stand up next, or compare myself to" anyone who post anything here"........... I am A Total Beginner.... Revel in that.... Ive been doing this for only a year... I don't claim to be a poet. Or any type of accomplished lyricist... I DO know that what i write comes strait from my heart and life.... whether i spell it right or not... So mister buckle......... My Life exp, Or how much i get out has nothing to do with this Sir... I am here just to vent, and out of curiosity... But who am i to infringe? " No One " So Maybe I took this way out of context.... Or maybe i don't know what the frick context is!!!.... But I will Still Pull the skin away... Because all I write is life and feeling.... So... I don't really understand why i should get out more... Is is my grammar? or something along those lines?... Please make it more clear to me... So that we can truly converse.
Sleepy.....
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