ELECTRIYIN' KISSES - Writers Forum

Chris71 · 02-19-2008, 04:25 PM

Once I got hit by lightning, right on my head
All my friends thought surly I was dead
I jumped right up, started to speak
Campared to my girls kisses, that was a peck on the cheek

CHORUS

Cause she's got electrifyin' kisses
Now I know what bliss is
Her electriftin' kisses make me glow
Kissin' don't need a reason
And it's always kissin' season
Now I've got tingles from my head down to my toes

I'm wild about her kisses, oh what a girl
Each time she kisses me my toes start to curl
My ears start to quiver, my nose starts to twitch
Like grabbin' an electric wire when someone flips the switch

CHORUS

Cause she's got electrifyin' kisses
Now I know what bliss is
Her electrifyin' kisses make me glow
Kissin' don't need a reason
And it's always kissin' season
Now I've got tingles from my head down to my toes

Her kisses really move me, oh what a shock
My knees start shakin' and my jaw starts to lock
My eyes are spinnin' like some wild machine
I'm afriad to make love to her, if you know what I mean

CHORUS

Cause she's got electrifyin' kisses
Now I know what bliss is
Her electrifyin' kisses make me glow
Kissin' don't need a reason
and it's always kissin' season
Now I've got tingles from my head down to my toes

CHRIS71

Tom · 02-19-2008, 05:14 PM

Its different, I will give you that.

The whole concept of the song was good, but I personaly didn't like it, but thats my own opinion. I mean for one I can see it isn't my kind of music and that in parts it seems a little cliche.

Good try though,

Tom.

AceReject · 02-20-2008, 04:12 PM

I kind of like it, it's different and it took me until the first chorus to realise what it was about. I didn't like the first verse. I could imagine it being rapped and I think the rhythm in the chorus is good.

T.W. North · 02-21-2008, 12:54 AM

Screw that, the first chorus was the best part. xD This is very old school rock 'n' roll, and it something original from that style, which is hard to find these days. Overall, I really liked these lyrics, they're corny, but a good measure of seriousness and jokiness spread throughout. =P

Chris71 · 02-21-2008, 03:55 PM

Thank you for your feed back, just trying to lighten things up around here.