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Old 02-17-2008, 12:36 PM   #1
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And so I play my guitar
I always play my guitar

I feel a sole flame on my eyelids
on a journey that follows through the years
which twist upon themselves.

the melody I released to the water surface
which reflects the remnants of summer,
even if so far away it never comes to be...

in that endless flow is this momentary sound
drifting to the mountain and the forest, shaking
even the conflicts we can't love, are swallowed by the waves
the song left to the flow sinks into you.

forever lailala lailalala the ripple of one drop
forever lailala lailalala drowning in the feeling

the sound of the leaves rustling
I always play my guitar

Oh great rolling river,
Do you think me strange to be terrified of a little shadow ?

this twinkling of life, blown by progress
deep deep in our memory, what do we see there?

in that endless flow is this painful sound
drifting to the mountain and the forest, shaking
even the conflicts we can't love, are swallowed by the waves
the song left to the flow sinks into you.

forever lailala lailalala gently held
forever lailala lailalala by the gaze of history.
shaking, rocking


Thoughts please
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Old 02-17-2008, 01:17 PM   #2
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And so I play my guitar
I always play my guitar

I feel a sole flame on my eyelids
on a journey that follows through the years
which twist upon themselves.

the melody I released to the water surface
which reflects the remnants of summer,
even if so far away it never comes to be...

in that endless flow is this momentary sound
drifting to the mountain and the forest, shaking
even the conflicts we can't love, are swallowed by the waves
the song left to the flow sinks into you.

forever lailala lailalala the ripple of one drop
forever lailala lailalala drowning in the feeling

the sound of the leaves rustling
I always play my guitar

Oh great rolling river,
Do you think me strange to be terrified of a little shadow ?

this twinkling of life, blown by progress
deep deep in our memory, what do we see there?

in that endless flow is this painful sound
drifting to the mountain and the forest, shaking
even the conflicts we can't love, are swallowed by the waves
the song left to the flow sinks into you.

forever lailala lailalala gently held
forever lailala lailalala by the gaze of history.
shaking, rocking


Thoughts please
great use of imagery. I like it a lot
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