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02-16-2008, 09:47 PM
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Tameless Soul
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02-17-2008, 12:56 PM
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Originally Posted by mythologicalrealities
As we found you, in the wilderness forest.
You were as wild as a harlot.
Not a care to what they prey thought of you.
And the siren, will sound the dawn of a new day.
As graceful as the elven.
Where nothing is to be hunted by the heart.
You decide, if they should die.
Whether they live, or be sacrificed to Iblis.
You decide, if you should die.
Whether you live, or be sacrificed to Iblis.
As we searched for the pillars of eternal peace.
We find the dryad of the forest.
And we asked for him to tell us what to do.
And he answered, with the choir of the forest.
In the way of the rising sun.
Is where our dreams all lie.
We are looking for a higher power.
Needlessly helping all the chield.
Poison scent of the flower.
Breaking down all our shields.
We are looking for the master of high.
Breaking down all the foes.
Ultimate betrayal in a lie.
As their sins sink so low.
As the witches of the seas.
Fly through the heavens above.
They peer on the Earth.
And slay all the foe.
As they become the shingami.
They watch the words sorrow.
They watch the spear stab me.
And watch me fall to the shadows.
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pretty good, but weird. Can I ask you what its about? |
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02-17-2008, 11:30 PM
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Damian, if you don't know what something is about, how can you say it is good?
And it's because of the fact that I only have a vaugest of ideas of what this is about, I can't say much about it. I'm really not sure what you're trying to do. The title gives a little bit away, but not enough to be sure....
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02-18-2008, 03:07 AM
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Its about looking inside your soul, finding everything you could be, being almost posessed by this fantasy, and being unable to live it.
Its like... How you feel powerless in todays society, but when you look outside the box you are penalized for it.
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Vampires, Elves and Greek Mythology...
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02-18-2008, 09:35 AM
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Originally Posted by T.W. North
Damian, if you don't know what something is about, how can you say it is good?
And it's because of the fact that I only have a vaugest of ideas of what this is about, I can't say much about it. I'm really not sure what you're trying to do. The title gives a little bit away, but not enough to be sure....
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No I did, but I kind of thought it was based off a movie I saw. Cuz it reminded me of it. So I wondering if it was based off it |
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