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Old 02-12-2008, 04:00 PM   #1
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Superman

I'm a smallville fan for those who know it, and In an addictive and somewhat sad way I decided to write a song influenced by it. It's strange, yet I like the flow that is unique about it. Thanks in advance for reading and Im looking forward to your critique.



Superman:



I might not wear a cape,
So what if I can’t die,
I’m just a normal being,
A being who can fly,

And what If I can see you,
When you’re not even there,
Doesn’t matter if I’ll burn you,
With a single depressed stare.

Because the truth that’s hidden behind the shadows,
The realisation you haven’t seen,
My powers are only a certain degree,
Of who and what I’ve been,

So as a soar through the skies,
Regretting all my lies,
All the powers you think I can,
But without you,
I’m no superman…

While you stand both in awe,
Horrified at me,
Don’t you realise the truth,
The truth you cannot see,

Open up your eyes,
Look deeper inside,
Apart from kryptonite,
You’re the reason I hide,

Because the reason of which, the final conclusion,
Each time that we touch,
I feel my power drained, I’m hung over by my confusion,
But it’s a broken clutch,

So as a soar through the skies,
Regretting all my lies,
All the powers you think I can,
But without you,
I’m no superman…

And as the wind pounds my face,
And my hears begins to race,
And though a mission has been set,
It’s you I can’t forget…

So as a soar through the skies,
Regretting all my lies,
All the powers you think I can,
But without you,
I’m no superman…
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Old 02-12-2008, 04:53 PM   #2
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Nice man, nice. I like the way its kinda comical when it says:

Doesn’t matter if I’ll burn you,
With a single depressed stare.

I think thats pretty good cuz of his heat vision. But on another note, you did it well as a whole. I like smallville and this song pretty much hits the nail on the head about Clark

Do me a favor, check out my song:

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I enjoyed it. Reminds me of Joe Brooks' "Superman". Overall, well done.
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