Damian_Rucci

Hey guys this is a song I wrote a couple weeks ago, check it out and please leave a comment and some criticism


"Eyes Open"

I remember that same blue sky
We were so alive, we swore we could fly
I remember how the green grass grow
So happy it just showed
We were just some punk ass kids
'Fuck you mother fucker' I can deal with it
We all just merged and blended
Not religious, yet we prayed it extended

*Chorus*
It feels like the first time
I'm living my life again
Just like that first rhyme
I got my eyes open again!

I remember, so long ago
We all just got a long, just so you know
Even though we just sat and did shit
We all liked it, don't wanna admit it
And I remember out in the sun
Surrounded shallowness, just having fun
The water just like silver
Look in your eyes, you just shimmer!

*Chorus*(2)

My heart bout to race
As I see your face
It wasn't him, wasn't me, wasn't you
We all just got so heated
It came unglued
They say it was just a phase
Then why does it play in my mind
Over and over again?

*chorus

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citygirl

"please live a comment and some criticism" Oops, I think you meant "leave"

Anyway, think it is fine, not keen on swearing though, but hey, that is the way things seem to be these days.....ha...

Do you have music for this?

Damian_Rucci

ha ha thanks I'll edit that. I have some very basic tabs that I keep on trying to spruce up a bit on my guitar but I'm a newbie at it(still getting lessons). Hopefully, one day I can get actual good tabs for my lyrics. Thanks for the post

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