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Old 02-09-2008, 11:31 AM   #1
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Not that Weak

Not that weak
Verse 1
Did you think I'd fall apart,
or that I didn't have the heart,
to live, without you,
to find something to fill your shoes.
To be happy, all on my own,
or survive, the singles zone?

Bridge
If you thought that I'd feel bad,
let me tell you baby, you've been had,

Chorus
'cos
Surprise, surprise, I'm not that weak,
I won't run away and hide.
You were just a stop, on my way,
but thank-you for the ride.
Surprise, surprise, I'm not that weak,
I'll fast forward and carry on.
change the tune in my life,
and sing a brand new song.

Verse 2
Now you see I'm not that tame,
you see your loss, is now my gain.
New friends, having fun,
out all night, 'till morning comes.
Party, party then party again,
thats the change to now from then

Bridge
If you thought that I'd feel bad,
let me tell you baby, you've been had.

Chorus
'cos
Surprise, surprise, I'm not that weak,
I won't run away and hide.
You were just a stop, on my way,
but thank-you for the ride.
Surprise, surprise, I'm not that weak,
I'll fast forward and carry on.
change the tune in my life,
and sing a brand new song.

Middle eight
Now I hear you want me back,
It's not gonna happen and thats a fact,
do you think I'm not that strong?
guess what baby, you're oh so wrong.

Chorus
'cos
Surprise, surprise, I'm not that weak,
I won't run away and hide.
You were just a stop, on my way,
but thank-you for the ride.
Surprise, surprise, I'm not that weak,
I'll fast forward and carry on.
change the tune in my life,
and sing a brand new song.
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Old 02-09-2008, 02:28 PM   #2
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catchy tune. Liked it a lot.

the chorus was a bit wordy in spots. But was good still.
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Old 02-09-2008, 03:03 PM   #3
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I like it only problem I had was the bridge. Just didn't work well with me
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Old 02-13-2008, 06:03 PM   #4
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Thanks

Crash,
Thanks.

Damian,
I could change the bridge to "you should be sad" instead of "you've been had" if that would make it better?
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Old 02-14-2008, 04:17 AM   #5
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I don't know the rhyme pattern just didn't appeal to me. But that could just be me
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