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Old 02-08-2008, 12:43 AM   #1
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Omen Returned

6 more times to spin this chamber
in this 80 mile russian roulette
Norepinephrine pulses in the veins
Invisible proof I'm not insane

And so I fly at 75
This feeling comes, and it reminds
Of a time where life was tenuous
remember how we roamed the streets?

Those nights we didn't know
If we'd ever even make it home
The streetlights spoke in tongues
Now I find my omen has returned.

Is it the same out where you are.
Have the lights begun their dance?
We, touched by destiny absurd
Dive headlong to the final word?


I know I've been accused of being a vocabulary showoff before, but I wanted to put in the Norepinephrine in before I knew what the word was. I knew it existed by didn't know the name for it. Its one of 2 stress hormones in the human body, the one thats mostly associated with ADHD.
This was partly written about my car which has a really bad safety issue going right now and I've been worrying it'll kill me. (buying a new car tomorrow, but still have a long work commute before that) the 6 more times represented the 6 more hour commutes I had to do. its down to 2 spins now.
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Old 02-08-2008, 04:49 AM   #2
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I liked the song over all, but it seems a bit over worded, if that makes sense? Not to be offensive I'm just giving criticism.
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Oh no worries about being offensive, I totally welcome criticism. Anything you can add to clarify that though? I'm not sure if you mean I'm being diction heavy or repeating ideas or something else.
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I just mean that I feel you are using too heavy of descriptive words and that is distracting the main idea. Songs need description but not too much
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