Quote:
Originally Posted by nia mora
And this is my last request
That you don't bleed your apologies
And scream all of your sorries
Because I think this is it and
I don't want to be trapped
With the guilt that you've left me
chorus:
But looking back at all the mistakes we made
I don't think we can ever be the same again
So now we're stuck to drown in our regret
And pray that we can change for the better
(I think the chorus should be a bit stronger and hard hitting)
You've lost your faith in me and
Are ready to walk right out that door
And leave me here with my heart on the floor
With only one person to blame, myself
chorus
Everything is different as our hatred floods this place
And as our wishes our severed from our hearts,
We realize that we're both alone.
We've got our fingers pointed at each other
When they should be pointed at ourselves
chorus
Theres nothing left for us now
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i liked it, but I think the chorus needs a little bit of work. I liked the theme of it,maybe to spruce it up a bit you can cut down on the ands
