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Originally Posted by T.W. North
Mmm, kingajcice, I advise next time you don't try to argue with Mystery whether or not he's right, he won't give in, so there's no point. If you don't like what he says ignore him, but he can say some really good things as well, so yeah.
This song is pretty bad though, as Mystery has said, it seems very much like you think you have to talk about death and pain and in fact mention death and pain in your lyrics in order to be hard. YOU DON'T. Some bands do, yes, but then, generally the lyrics aren't really what makes them good (and sometimes they're not good anyway). If you want to right lyrics make sure of some things first:
a) you actually have something to say other than 'death'
b) don't just say the same thing constantly throughout the song, use imagery.
c) your chorus actually had the potential to be catchy if it wasn't so redundant.
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I'm not arguing with him, just adding stuff to his own consideration to help him give advice and critique. I don't want to argue, it's obvious to me that it's an awful song now, thank you for you input as well, I'm taking all of it into consideration.
Really, thank you, and thank you mystery, don't think I'm arguing please.
