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Old 01-16-2008, 08:34 AM   #1
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Ashes of Determination

This is an old one, but I've always liked it. It's a bit dark, but sometimes that's when the better stuff comes out. Enjoy!

Sitting alone in silence
Wondering still what went wrong
Wishing things could have been done
To save what was dead and lost

Existence
Wounds opened
Desperate
Death woken

In the end all that was left
Was still less than what was gone
Cold steel release of the pain
From life heals all that was done

Time twisted
Love broken
Lives wasted
Thoughts hopeless

Clouds forming in the distance
Darkness breaking in again
Rain falls, burning the stitches
Wounded, unhealed from within

Existence
Wounds opened
Desperate
Awoken

Cracked open to see inside
Escapes with only a sigh
Reborn again without fear
Life is more livable here

Time twisted
Love broken
Lives wasted
Thoughts Opened

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