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Old 01-14-2008, 06:31 PM   #1
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Song- When The Pain Subsides

(Chorus)
When the pain subsides,
You’ll see the light.
Running and moving towards you.
Like a force of fate,
Pushing your feet to ground,
And you realize everything is fine.
When the pain subsides….

(Verse)
I listened to the voice,
Of an almighty man.
Standing in a doorway,
Engulfed in a white light.
I stood in awe,
As he said to me.

(Repeat Chorus)

(Verse)
I’ve seen angels,
Fly across the sky.
I’ve seen heaven,
Looking through the eyes,
Of the man,
Who again said to me.

(Repeat Chorus)

(Verse)
He changed my life,
With just those simple words.
I knew then,
That this wasn’t the end.

He disappeared,
With a flash of light.
I looked at where he stood,
And heard his voice again.

(Repeat Chorus)

(Ending Verse)
When the pain subsides…
You’ll see the light…
Like a force of fate…

Everything is fine…
When the pain subsides…
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Old 01-14-2008, 07:04 PM   #2
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Let me suggest that you lead off with the chorus...it;s a good first line and sets up a sort of question that the first verse answers.
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I see what you mean.Thanks!
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