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Old 01-14-2008, 03:24 PM   #1
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Invisible

Okay so I wrote this about a year ago. I need opinions

INVISIBLE

Whenever I’m here you don’t see me
When I cry, you don’t see my tears
How do I chase away these fears
To get you to see my love towards you

Chorus:
I’m invisible to you
You don’t know the way I feel
When I see your face I start to cry
Because I’m invisible to you
If I say "Hello" you turn away
If I smile at you I start to fret
I’m invisible to your eyes and yet
I can’t help but wonder do you love me too

Chorus

Bridge:
Why oh why can’t I be seen
Why won’t you understand me
Why are you so so mean
I love you can’t you see
When I am here I’m never in the room
If I try to speak you shut the door in my face
I can’t go on living at this pace
Because I need to know if you love me too

Chorus 2X
I’m invisible to you
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