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Old 11-21-2007, 09:53 PM   #1
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"Lost in the Mind"

Hell everyone!! Long time no see, well I am returning here with several new songs, this one I shall post first. It is quite hardcore, it is written to a fast and heavy beat, which is rock (of course) If it sounds crazy or out of pace or such a thing, I purely did it on purpose no seriously, it is purely a jumble of emotions which emphasizes the titles. Just explaining to avoid confusing. Thanks for reading. Genre- Screamo/hardcore
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Hell's wrath, descend upon me
Of course, only figuratively speaking
Yet I feel it calling!
Look down to the dark I'm falling
So empty, will anyone catch me?
Or will I become swallowed by insanity?

*Chorus*:
As the tides change
I'm turning over
And the dark comes piercing through my mind
When I'm fallen, can I find
Anything that'll keep me lying here

The grave's constantly killing
As it's disintegrating my instincts
I turn around for a surprise
Only to hear a word from the wise
I'll sit back and listen
Only to watch my blood glisten!

*chorus*

When the last ounce is gone
I'll hide away till the dawn
Of the pain and disaster
I'll leave the death till after
The mind numbing pain disappears
And then in the dark I'll live my fears

Small one, what is it?
What is it you desire?
Small one, be calm don't throw a fit
INTO THE FIRE!

*chorus* (2)
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Old 11-21-2007, 10:56 PM   #2
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I like the title.
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Old 11-22-2007, 05:42 AM   #3
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Hell's wrath, descend upon me
Of course, only figuratively speaking
That's where I stopped reading.
Say it in your head. Do you hear why it's wrong?
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Old 11-22-2007, 08:51 AM   #4
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no I don't.......
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Old 11-22-2007, 11:13 AM   #5
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figuratively is a hard word to sing, and it doesn't make much sense with the line above it...you'd have to say it as figurely or something like that for it to make even a little sense.

that's what he's saying, I think...
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Old 11-22-2007, 06:54 PM   #6
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Verse, rhyme, syllables, flow.

Do these things mean anything to you? IF not, revise and start writing your lyric from scratch.
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Old 11-24-2007, 12:54 AM   #7
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um yes they do mean something to me, but the way lyrics flow differs on the way its played. Does music mean anything to you?
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