Be mine - Writers Forum

kaytea111 · 11-21-2007, 08:58 PM

Just listen to your heart,
Dont let no one tell who you are,
Just open up your eyes,
And see the world like you've never done before,

Oh, so many things will get in your way,
Oh, but you know, you know, you know its gonna be okay

(Chorus)
And breathe,
Let her know you love her,
So many girls would want to be yours,
You are hers but you do not know,
She may find herself runnin from you,
Because she cant do you like I do,
But you will one day soon.. be mine

Just never give up hope,
There's many fish in the sea,
Never give up love,
It will only take you down one road alone,

Oh, so many people will get in your way,
OH, but you know, you know, you know its gonna be okay,

(Chorus)
And breathe,
Let her know you love her,
So many girls would want to be yours,
You are hers but you do not know,
She may find herself runnin from you,
Because she cant do you like I do,
But you will one day soon.. be mine

I'll wait patiently,
I'll wait willingly and one day soon, one day far,
one day you will soon be mine

(Chorus)
And breathe,
Let her know you love her,
So many girls would want to be yours,
You are hers but you do not know,
She may find herself runnin from you,
Because she cant do you like I do,
But you will one day soon.. be mine

Just listen to your heart,
Dont let no one tell who you are,

kaytea111 · 11-25-2007, 12:55 PM

no feedback??

abecfive · 12-05-2007, 07:02 PM

I really like it. This makes me think there is still hope for the one someone that you always will want back no matter how crazy it seems. I had a specific photogenic face in my head the entire time I was reading...

kaytea111 · 12-16-2007, 08:07 AM

T.W. North · 12-16-2007, 11:35 PM

This is actually a really good song, you're getting good kaytea, you really are. And the lyrics perfectly fit a female voice (I'm not saying a females perspective, but a female voice...like, I can hear the 'be mine' going quite high'). Nice job, nice message.