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Old 11-21-2007, 12:59 PM   #1
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my little box
And today I put my love in this little box
Leaving there my thoughts, my feeling,
My hopes and desires
And continue living my life
And when you'll come to me
One of these days
And ask for my heart
I'll open the box
And set my love free
Meanwhile I stop being your prisoner
And continue with my life
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Old 11-22-2007, 05:08 PM   #2
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its a cute poem. i really like it
i wouldnt call it lyrics tho..you need more to it
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Old 11-23-2007, 03:11 AM   #3
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Yeah, it's a poem more than lyrics. I agree on that. but oh well... =]
thanks alot! i'm glad you liked it. i started to freak out when no one posted a comment
i'm kinda new in this so it is a big deal.. =]

See ya.
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